Monday, January 7, 2008
Pride
I am a proud Mama. My big girl Amelia wants desperately to be a writer when she grows up. Here is the poem she wrote for her teacher at Christmas. She is nine years old.
A snowy day
White, not a pinch of any other color on the ground
The snow brings pleasure
Icicles hanging like frozen tears in the air
You look around and what you see is fun
Grabbing a sled resembling a rounded cookie
Running and tracking footprints in the marshmallow ground
You sled down a long hill
All time and space seems to whiz past you as you leave reality
You come back suddenly as you hit the bottom hard
You might cry
But, no, you think you will laugh
Snow trickles down your back as you echo
Miles and miles your laughing travels
You travel with it
You see so many people full of delight
They burst of laughter and enjoyment as you float past
Each turning into a silver firework
As silver as a frozen Popsicle
As silver as the “tears” on the windows
You come zooming back
Something cold and wet has just hit your leg
You quickly pack a ball of snow and hurl it at your accompanying person
You snowball fight until you think you are frozen
You enter the heat of the house and the welcoming smell of hot chocolate
Sitting by the warm fireplace, you drink a chocolaty liquid
It looks silver
Silver like the fireworks you witnessed
Silver like a heated marshmallow
Like the marshmallow ground you tracked through
You feel warmth and happiness as you tell stories around in circles
That is how a snowy day works
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